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What role does this character play?(Storybased): One of the mains
What inspired you to create this character?: The name of the day on  behindthename, and the need to find something to fall asleep to, actually.
What does this character represent to you, if anything?: N/A
What goals do you have for this character?: Successfully develop him as a story character

Physical


Full Name: Ahmos Salil Qasmit
Pronunciation of their name: əh-MOSS SA-lihl KAZ-mət
Meaning of their full name: Son of Iah // Sword // Fate
Why did their parents name them this?: Iah is an important character in Chiranjivi lore, and they wanted their son to have a legacy. At least, a name befitting a legacy
Why did you, their creator name them this?: It was the name of the day on behindthename, honestly that's the reason
Title: Chief
Nickname:  Salil
Why they have that as a nickname: It's customary to use one's middle name as an informal nickname in his culture
Do they like their nicknames?: He doesn't mind it

Sex: Male
Race/species: Human
Ethnicity: Chiranjivian
Realm/Universe: Alternate Earth
Share about this realm: Humans are commonplace, though strange birth defects are also becoming more present in the 1300s. Electricity doesn't exist yet, and the steam engine has just been fashioned. In the western part of the continent, there is much more invention than there is to the east, or even in the middle grounds. Owning slaves is acceptable, though not a common practice unless one happens to be in a position of authority. In the plains region of Patellar, women have nearly as much authority as men do. That's region exclusive. In Chiranjivi to the East, women are looked to as wise, but they don't have a large influence on the culture. In the western region of Corath women don't hold much power at all, though they are valued.
Age: 34 - he looks closer to 40 though, at least with a beard
Birth date: June 8th 1306
Death date: Yet to be decided
Birth place: Northern Chiranjivi, the village of Qar
Orientation/Sexual preference: Heterosexual
Why this sexual choice?: No attraction to males and he believes man and woman are to be together
Do they believe it's right?: Yes
Are they opposed for their sexual choice?: No, not at this point

Height: 5'10"(177cm)
Weight: 204lb (93 kg)
Are they overweight/underweight?: Considering his muscle mass, no he isn't overweight
Shoe size: If placed in modern society, he'd be a men's 10(US)
Blood type: O
Can they bleed?: Yes
What color is their blood?: Red

Describe their voice: He's slow-spoken and his voice is quite deep, due to the language he tends to speak more in his throat, which also produces a rasp. The only time it really gets high is if he's flustered.
Do they like their voice?: He doesn't dislike it
Do they usually speak like this(Or is it a learned behavior?)?: Depends on the language, in his native tongue his voice is more natural for him, however, he normally speaks in what Patellar folk speak in, so it's a bit learned since he has to use the front of his mouth more.
If it is a learned behavior, why did they learn it?: It was necessary due to his immigration
Do they sing?: No
If they sing, are they good at it?: No, not at all

Eye color: Burgundy
Is this eye color uncommon?: For Chiranjivi, no. For Patellar, yes
Are their eyes good?: He's somewhat farsighted

General facial structure:  Rectangular face, square-jawed with oval eyes
Face shape: Uneven rectangular sort of shape with a tapering at his chin, though his chin is certainly squared off. Prominent nose
Describe their eyes: Long and narrow, could be described as rigid ovals
Describe their nose: Roman-nosed, he has a strong profile and an uneven bump about half way up the bridge of his nose from where it was broken when he was a lad.
Describe their lips: Thin upper lip, not very prominent. His bottom lip is rigid, not very rounded or'lippy'
Ears(pointed, cat, etc.): Normal, Human ears

Body build(slim, muscular, etc.): "Big" he's muscular, and not lean muscled either, though he has a bit of a belly
Body type: Mesomorph
Posture(slouched, correct, etc.): Correct, usually. Slouchish if he's being a downer
Describe their smile: Small, false, generally melancholy
Body abnormalities: N/A
Describe how they walk: Hardstepped, confident
Why do they walk this way?: It was something his father taught him, being a confident man is necessity. "walk like you mean it"
Do they limp?: Unless injured, no he doesn't limp

Right/left handed(or ambidextrous perhaps?): Lefty
Big hands/small hands/something else?: Large hands
Long fingered/short
fingered hands?: Small fingers, larger palms - great for gripping things
Are their nails taken care of(Decently)?: For the era, yes

What kind of teeth do they have?: Normal human teeth
Do they take care of their teeth?: Yes
Dental condition: Good for the era

Hair color(s): Platinum/Ash/strawberry blond, his hair has a mix
Hair length: Shoulder
Dyed?: No
Hair style: All one length, style varies but his bangs are often pinned back
Why?:  He likes the style, and, it's simple. He doesn't have to do much
Is their hair healthy?: Yes
How thick?: Quite thick, it's also coarse

Skin color: Deep, reddish tan
Complexion: fairly clear, though his nose and forehead shine often from skin oil
Scars: Burns on his knuckles,
How did they get these scars?:
Birthmarks(and what they are):
Tattoos(what they are and where): None, tattoos are considered disgraceful
Reasons behind tattoos: N/A
Piercings(what they are and where): His ears are pierced, though he doesn't wear jewelry, as he lives in Patellar now and it isn't culturally acceptable.
Reasons behind piercings: In Chiranjivi it's a wealth or wisdom symbol

Describe an outfit they would wear: Loose fitting tunic and below-the-knee breeches, often times he'll wear a robe(jacket) over the tunic if he's not wearing one with sleeves. Open-toed shoes. No big deal.
Why do they have this clothing preference?: It's the cultural norm, and he likes a looser tunic than most


Mental|Spiritual|Emotional


Mental state: Sane
Mental disorders: none
Mental stability(relative to disorders): Stable
Why do they have this degree of mental stability?:

Emotional stability: So-so
Emotional disorder/ailment(s): Post traumatic stress disorder? I suppose that's the best way to describe it
Why do they have such/lack emotional stability?: He'll often reflect on his past doings and failures, one incident in particular on his quest for immortality some time ago.
Has their upbringing had an effect on their emotions?: Yep, in Chiranjivi culture there's kind of a 'suffer in silence' teaching, if you have a problem it isn't something you talk about. Culture shock compared to Patellar where you're expected to.
Why or why not?: Cultural norms

The age chart for emotional and mental things here is based on a human
lifespan.

Describe or share about their mental and emotional state during...
early childhood(3 - 5):
childhood(6 - 9):
adolescence/tween(10 -  12):
adolescence/teen(13 - 16):
teen continued(16 - 18):
young adulthood(19 - 25):
"official" adulthood(26 - 29):
adulthood continued(30 - 40):
half century(41 - 51):
up and onward(52+):

I will get on with this, as I look forward to filling it out. But there are spoliers I won't be spoling on dA.

Personality snapshot: Stoic, dependable, one of inner passion, hard to offend
In depth personality: Stubborn, passionate inwardly, one to think before speaking, slow paced, old fashioned, holds morals highly, fretful, preoccupied, melancholy(in areas), difficult to offend, stoic, dependable mentality
Most prominent personality trait: His stubbornness
Best traits of their personality: Dependable, think before speak, stubbornness, difficult to offend
Worst traits of their personality: Fretful, stoic, slow paced, stubbornness
What caused this kind of personality to form?: Upbringing and his own, the stoic, and stubborn demeanor are
Would you say their personality was influenced by their caretakers/guardians?: Oh yes
If so, who influenced their personality the most and how?: His father
If not, what was the greatest influence?: Next greatest influence is the culture
Do they like their personality?: He wishes he was a bit more 'with it', more upbeat(but everybody knows what happens when parental figures /try/ to do that)

Do they have a healthy self image(How they view themselves)?: It isn't awful, but it certainly isn't fantastic, though he considers himself a decent role model in some things.
If not, why?: He's made some very poor choices and doesn't want anyone he cares about, or even hates to have to go through what he did.

First impression usually given: People often compare him to a pillar, both in personality, and it body.
Are they logical thinkers?: Logical to a point, as with most people, when he's frightened, or very emotionally sparked(takes a lot for this) he becomes less logical
Right brain/left brained?: More left than right, I would say about 70% left brained, 30% right

Current faith(religion): Ahlkanism - believing in the Patellar goddess of earth Ahlka
If they do have one, why?: He kind of adopted it after immigrating from Chiranjivi
Are they strong in it?: Not particularly, he questions why he even adopted it now
Do they actively practice it?: Only in ritual events; his village practices it
Why did they choose this faith?: Adoption with location, he rolled with it instead of trying to bring along what he had believed in his homeland
Why do they believe this religious plunge is correct?: He doesn't, but he hasn't had conversation with his wife yet about it to explain why he thinks this is a bad spiritual direction
Do they know?: No

What superstitions do they have?: Tahgrei(wind children) will appear where light isn't present and steal one's vision and soul if they get close enough. It's a Chiranjivi myth, sandstorms are believed to be communities of Tahgrei migrating from place to place.
Reasons why they have these odd beliefs: Culture has had a huge influence in his life

Outlook on life: "It is what it's made to be, so I'll make the most out of it"
General attitude: Decent, not terribly motivated
What caused this attitude?: His own take of the world
Have they ever questioned their outlook on life?: Yes, regularly

Alignment: Bystander, but formerly, good
Why they chose this path: Path of least resistance, motivation is
Do they know the outcome of this choice?: He knows that it isn't good
Do they believe this is right?: No
If they don't believe it's correct, why do they stay on it?: Path of least resistance. Thankfully, his butt does get kicked into gear in the story.

Emotional trauma(if any, and why): Being caught in a Tahgrei(sand storm), his first quest for immortality which ended in utter failure(A failure that cost lives), Jelani's going missing
How do they respond when the trauma issue is talked about/touched on?: He
Does this trauma effect their day to day life?: Sand storm incident - no, immortality quest - only in September
Why, or why not?:
What made the situation traumatic to them?: The Tahgrei incident spooked him, and he thought he was cursed for a period of about three years. Quest for immortality ____________ I'll explain this soon. I'm not spoiling anything right now.
Would you say that their effects their environment more than they effect their environment?: Environment has a greater influence on him right now.

Morals: Don't kill or harm(unless in war), put others before yourself, show decent courtesy regardless of whether or not it's returned
What defines right and wrong for them?: His moral base, and the rules he was brought up with as a child, as well as the cultural definition in Patellar
Do they hold these morals for religious reasons?: Yes to an extent, Alkhanism focuses more on peace in times of peace, and the meaning of sacrifice when it isn't a time of peace
Do they hold their definitions of right and wrong above other people's methods?: Yes

Drugs they take/have taken/or do: He smokes a pipe sometimes
What caused them to do drugs?: No 'cause', he saw one of the gentlemen in Lelim smoking and asked if he could try shortly after arriving. He
Are they dependent on a certain drug?: No
Is it prescribed to them?: No
What is the purpose of the drugs they take?:  It calms him
How do their drugs effect them?(Personality, memory, etc.): Calming effect, he tends to be more laid back with a pipe

Earliest memory: The first fire festival he was allowed to dance in as a child(4)
Is this memory important to them?: Yes
Do they wish to forget it?: No
Are they glad they remember it?: Yes

How do they respond and/or react in times of...(and why they do what they do)
Happiness: Find out what the hubbub is about, and then let loose and partake
Excitement: If centered around him, he'll often be nervous at first, and if it's something he's excited about then he's one of the loudest ones shouting and going on about it
Surprise:
Grief: He'll withdraw, and do his grieving in silence
Pain: Withdraw if he's able, he'll try to figure is way out of it
Fear: Try to hide the fear and grit it out
Not knowing the outcome of some situation: Hide his uncertainty


Drive|Location|History


Current dream in life:  Have a good family, successfully lead his village and expand, ammend the past
Why is this their dream?: Family is very important to him
Long term goals: Have a larger family, expand his village, prepare Jelani for becoming chief(eventually)
Why?: Offspring are good, and he likes babies, having Lelim become a full-fledged city and not a little boon village would give him quite the sense of pride/ego boost. And, finally, his son needs to man up enough to become chief, so it's Ahmos' job to train him
Short term goals: Teach Jelani how to scout/how to sit through and take part in a village meeting, prepare him for responsibility
Why?: Jelani will be a bother otherwise, and the village heir needs to have some matsy about him
Life interests: Alchemy and other magic(former interest)

Where they're from: Tur
What country?: Chiranjivi
State/region?: Northern
City?: Qar

Current residence: The village of Lelim in Southern Patellar
Do they live at their current residence by will?: Yes

Backstory(C'mon authors, I know how fun it is to go on about characters, don't wimp out here, oh and feel free to remove this lovely parenthesis noteline, haha): I'll omit this for now

I'LL FILL THIS OUT SOON.
Tell about some major events that happened within these ages...
early childhood(3 - 5):
childhood(6 - 9):
adolescence/tween(10 -  12):
adolescence/teen(13 - 16):
teen continued(16 - 18):
young adulthood(19 - 25):
"official" adulthood(26 - 29):
adulthood continued(30 - 40):
half century(41 - 51):
up and onward(52+):

Family background:
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Did they enjoy their upbringing?:
What did/do they most enjoy about their childhood?:
What did/do they most resent about their childhood?:

Relationships|Education|Finances



Marital status: Married
Spouse: Israa
What kind of romantic are they?(easily lovestruck, tough nut, etc.):
What caused them to become this sort of romantic?:
What traits do they look for in a possible lover?:
Are they picky when it comes to romance searching?:
If not, why?:
If so, why?:
Do they "sleep around"?:
If so, why?:
Do their morals allow room for this without guilt?:
If their morals do not, why do they?:
Does sex matter to them?:
If not, why?:
If so, why?:

If you would like, explain the family tree behind/around your character:

Parents: Rahim(father) and Aida(mother)
How did their parents meet?: Rahim was a tailor and was contracted by Aida's family, where he fell for her at first glance. A year's labor under her father later, he asked for her hand in marriage and she accepted.

Children: Jelani(Son), Monifa(Daughter), Chiamaka(Daughte) and Fayiz(Son)
Are they illegitimate children?: No
Any grandchildren?: Juda, Malak
Great grandchildren?: No
Siblings of your OC: Alba, Gamila, Lamis, Latifa and Maha(all sisters)
Inner circle: Israa, Fadia, Javug,
Business colleagues/acquaintances: August, Ineses, Javug, Jafar, Hadil

Occupation: Chief, flour mill operator
Why they picked this occupation: He wanted to help Lelim move forward
Brief job history: He was a tailor before this as a family trade


Up close and personal


Biggest phobia: Zada
How often does this fear take a toll on them?: Whenever she creeps around

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Do they depend on this hope?:
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What are their...
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What makes them tick(think the way they do)?:

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Sleeping habits:
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If they aren't skilled socially, how does day to day life go?:

Can they honestly hold a job down?:
If not, why can't they?:
How do they stay afloat in society if they cannot hold a job down?:
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What's their favorite time of day?:
Why is this their favorite time of day?:
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First language:
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Was their an urgent need to learn this second language?:
If there was, why was there?:

Pet(s):
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Told you I was up to something.

Anyway. It isn't finished but I wanted a hand at developing Ahmos somewhat.
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